圖書標籤: LGBTQ Fanfic-to-Original F/F_Romance
发表于2024-11-22
Meeting Mrs. Garret pdf epub mobi txt 電子書 下載 2024
Natalie Navarro is just looking to help a friend come out when she meets Madeline Garret. A busy young woman working her way through college, Natalie isn't looking for any complicated emotional entanglements.
Madeline Garret has been married to the same man for nearly twenty years. With her daughter in college and him frequently away for work, Maddie often finds herself alone in their empty house.
When circumstances conspire to have Natalie around, Maddie thinks she's found a way to be closer to her daughter. And maybe a new friend.
Natalie is okay with that... but as they spend time together, something begins to change.
[A slow burn May-September romance.]
節奏問題太嚴重。這篇文比wanting her長很多,到瞭50%之前都是日常相處逐漸雙嚮暗戀,到75%之前都沒有正麵對峙明朗化,而是心照不宣地為道德睏境暗自摺磨,這麼一磨兩磨到瞭將近90%倆人纔突然點燃燒著,緊接著就被抓包,作者到這一部分徹底放棄自己。馬上Natalie有個齣去實習的機會,Maddie被前夫和女兒的指責壓得喘不過氣來的時候Natalie遠走不說,居然在機場告彆的時候當場分手,exm???美其名曰覺得自己配不上希望分開之後Maddie能跟女兒修復關係,不是,大妹子,這時候Maddie身心受挫您還拍拍屁股跑瞭不怕她抑鬱自殺嗎???這文寫到這兒我覺得已經沒任何意義瞭,作者也已把持不足節奏,索性自暴自棄快速又來個不走心的復閤和四年後的尾聲,完成任務==
評分節奏問題太嚴重。這篇文比wanting her長很多,到瞭50%之前都是日常相處逐漸雙嚮暗戀,到75%之前都沒有正麵對峙明朗化,而是心照不宣地為道德睏境暗自摺磨,這麼一磨兩磨到瞭將近90%倆人纔突然點燃燒著,緊接著就被抓包,作者到這一部分徹底放棄自己。馬上Natalie有個齣去實習的機會,Maddie被前夫和女兒的指責壓得喘不過氣來的時候Natalie遠走不說,居然在機場告彆的時候當場分手,exm???美其名曰覺得自己配不上希望分開之後Maddie能跟女兒修復關係,不是,大妹子,這時候Maddie身心受挫您還拍拍屁股跑瞭不怕她抑鬱自殺嗎???這文寫到這兒我覺得已經沒任何意義瞭,作者也已把持不足節奏,索性自暴自棄快速又來個不走心的復閤和四年後的尾聲,完成任務==
評分Maddie deserves better
評分Maddie deserves better
評分Maddie deserves better
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Meeting Mrs. Garret pdf epub mobi txt 電子書 下載 2024